an excellent piece in that it is thorough and detailed, and covers all key components required.
to boost it up to an A however, you will need to focus a little more on your production. After all, that is what the question is about. Instead you spend 90% of the time talking about real texts, which is good, just the ratio is off.
Really discuss your mise-en-sccene, camera work, characters and so on - what did you use/challenge/develop. but also how and why?
an excellent piece in that it is thorough and detailed, and covers all key components required.
ReplyDeleteto boost it up to an A however, you will need to focus a little more on your production. After all, that is what the question is about. Instead you spend 90% of the time talking about real texts, which is good, just the ratio is off.
Really discuss your mise-en-sccene, camera work, characters and so on - what did you use/challenge/develop. but also how and why?
B
see emails for break down of evaluation marks and areas for improvement (you only have 48 hours to fix things and must email me if so):
ReplyDelete1 - B
2 - D
3 - C
4 - B/C
you need to order the blog too